26 December 2005, 23:54 UTC#1
here's a skit I might put in the video. It's the first skit we've ever filmed. I need some advice on how I can make it better or funnier.
http://disturbedfilms.com/wmp.php?id=211327 December 2005, 00:05 UTC#2
Well I cant tell you if it was good or bad, it was too short, I thought it was going to be funny, then I saw how long it was
Err try and make it longer, like the guy whos sleeping there could just be sat in the corner, with a huge grin on his face, then the other guys like "hey, wtf." He shouldnt just kick him out really quickly.
Film it again and just make it longer really.
27 December 2005, 01:26 UTC#3
25 second skit?
27 December 2005, 01:34 UTC#4
lmao
27 December 2005, 01:42 UTC#5
well, I really liked the opening shot. but nothing really happened. you gotta have at least some kinda plot. and the inside shot needed a tripod. be in frame more. it jsut looked really crappy coming from that great outside shot.
yeah, that's it.
27 December 2005, 01:43 UTC#6
Odd, very odd.
Too short to comment on really, not much humour involved as all you did was tell some mate to get outta your wooden house. You gotta think before you make skits, write a story line and make it funny. You seem to have a decent camera and your clip was pretty good quality. Improvise on the skits
27 December 2005, 02:04 UTC#7
That was stupid.
27 December 2005, 06:10 UTC#8
u dont need people to tell u whats good/wrong with your shit, if u like it its good. there are no rules to homegrown. theres no set good and bad. homegrown is what u make it.(even though most people here are bounded by skits, pranks and stunts.)
27 December 2005, 06:13 UTC#9
QUOTE(Duran @ Dec 27 2005, 06:10 AM) [snapback]253023[/snapback]
u dont need people to tell u whats good/wrong with your shit, if u like it its good. there are no rules to homegrown. theres no set good and bad. homegrown is what u make it.(even though most people here are bounded by skits, pranks and stunts.)
Just wait till my make our second dvd.
All it's gonna be is interpretive dance and water polo.
27 December 2005, 07:52 UTC#10
QUOTE(funk master steven @ Dec 27 2005, 06:13 AM) [snapback]253025[/snapback]
QUOTE(Duran @ Dec 27 2005, 06:10 AM) [snapback]253023[/snapback]
u dont need people to tell u whats good/wrong with your shit, if u like it its good. there are no rules to homegrown. theres no set good and bad. homegrown is what u make it.(even though most people here are bounded by skits, pranks and stunts.)
Just wait till my make our second dvd.
All it's gonna be is interpretive dance and water polo.
lmao.
27 December 2005, 10:11 UTC#11
Either that just diddn't finish uploading and he dont know, or it really was that pointless and crap.
Sorry dude, it had no plot, no point, nothing funny. You kinda need to have a story line of some sort, a plot to follow.
27 December 2005, 10:58 UTC#12
Hahhaha I loved it!!!
Hahah it was an awesome encounter. You need to make more skits where the dude sleeps at different places and the other guy wakes him up.
Like in the bathroom, on the patio, under the kitchen table, in the sauna, under the other guys bed, in the car, in the garage, in the other guys sisters bed, on the roof, in the shed, under the stairs, in you swiming pool...
Hahhaha now do it! That would have been an awesome skit... Im sorry you dont posses my mastermind! But feel free to do this and make a sensational skit!
and yes the skit was too short but it was promising as I stated!!!
ps. I wanna have a treehouse!!!
27 December 2005, 11:20 UTC#13
Wasn't good wasn't bad, just very random
27 December 2005, 21:14 UTC#14
ummmmm I dunno what to say..
28 December 2005, 18:06 UTC#15
That's not a skit. That's just a random clip. I liked it. Usually when I read a lot of complaining about something, I expect it to suck. People don't like it because you said it was a skit. It was just a random act. And I enjoyed it because bums do that all the time here.
Nice treehouse by the way.
