My Portfolio

so I'm in my final year of multimedia and after seeing all you kids on here pump out amazing shit I feel like a cheap whore.

here's my latest version of my portfolio. can you guys critique it and possibly make some enhancing suggestions?

Thanks,

you spelled "server" wrong , otherwise its cool, maybe a font change

I know verrry little about photoshop but thats awesome. how long did that take you?

I just did it now.. in I dunno.. 30 minutes
but thanks


and look what I just found!!:

External image not preserved — inspect source: http://www.yorkshiresoul.org/visual%201.jpg

AHHH.. it's MOVING!!..... but it's not... Image file not present in the recovered backup

Hah dude, that fucks my eyes up soo much.

Great portfilio by the way. I like it.

Looks pretty K, not bad at all. On the right it says "My nameS is John Hendel".. Just letting you know Image file not present in the recovered backup

The appearence is good, I'd just say go back in and proof read and check for spelling and grammer mistakes, also double check the coding if you used any scripts, just to be on the safeside

I like the apperance its really nice...


Outlines maybe it needs otulines... erm.. yeah

you put "my names is Jon", it should be my name is Jon.

doesnt really look like a portfoilio tho , looks like your trying to sell something or your part of an enviromentalist group

Love the port.. it trully draws u in and makes you want to see more..

on the spining pic, place your pointer over one of the small images and it makes it stop the feeling of it turning

That header image is far too big, leaves hardly any room for content. The buttons look nice though.

excellent feedback guys!!

thank you so much

as for the content.. that was mearly a place-holder... wasn't too concerned about grammar and whatnot

I'll keep you posted on how it comes. Everything will be on http://www.jonhendel.com

cheers,

Nice site.

Btw, where do you get your images from? I really need some good clean stock images.

You can do better. But not bad.

hahaha.. I know

I have such an easy time designing for everyone else.. but for mylsef.. im so damn picky.. and when I think of myself.. a big BLANK comes to mind.

so MADE.. if you want to give me a template... maybe it'd work out better for both of us

Jonneh, plz tell me where you get your images from. They always rock.

And I agree with MADE, you can so MUCH MUCH better than that, nevertheless I still like it.

http://www.istockphoto.com
really cheap. $1 /photo and royaltee free

www.sxc.hu

^^Greatest StockPhoto site...

ooo.. that's good for free photos

but istock has more "designy" photos

What you got in mind Mr G?

http://jonhendel.com/index.htm

cleaned it up a bit