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First real PS project

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post #2
20 September 2005, 09:41 UTC#2
Looks ok, make the text not so plain, k?
post #3
20 September 2005, 09:43 UTC#3
QUOTE(itsallinthehips @ Sep 20 2005, 04:41 AM)
Looks ok, make the text not so plain, k?
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Suggestions?
post #4
20 September 2005, 09:50 UTC#4
Too tired/stupid. Go to dafont.com, Install a cool font, use that, problem solved. Pretty good if you haven't been using ps for long.

Edit: BORDER.
post #5
20 September 2005, 10:59 UTC#5
im not sure I like the bright green
post #6
20 September 2005, 12:30 UTC#6
*Moved to Photoshop*

Personally I dont like it, the text is horrid.

I like the theme you chose, but it could better.
post #7
20 September 2005, 12:33 UTC#7
The text is horrible, both the font and colour.
post #8
20 September 2005, 12:58 UTC#8
Yeah the text is awful the rest looks pretty good though. Keep on PSing :)
post #9
20 September 2005, 13:45 UTC#9
I don't think there a lot to critize.
post #10
20 September 2005, 16:35 UTC#10
I like it..cept where it says Gas Mask Designs..looks skethy
post #11
20 September 2005, 16:40 UTC#11
Sorry dude, I don't like it. Looks too filtery and theres too much blank space, text is gross too.
post #12
20 September 2005, 16:43 UTC#12
Excellent first attempt though. Don't like it a whole load, but you have great potential.
post #13
20 September 2005, 16:46 UTC#13
nice attempt indeed. The text is truely horrific.... and the objects look misplaced somehow... try to get some depth in the picture somehow...
post #14
20 September 2005, 17:02 UTC#14
QUOTE(gman @ Sep 20 2005, 04:43 PM)
Excellent first attempt though. Don't like it a whole load, but you have great potential.
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Thats true, good job for a first try Image file not present in the recovered backup
post #15
20 September 2005, 17:11 UTC#15
QUOTE(lifeofboredom @ Sep 20 2005, 05:02 PM)
QUOTE(gman @ Sep 20 2005, 04:43 PM)
Excellent first attempt though. Don't like it a whole load, but you have great potential.
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Thats true, good job for a first try Image file not present in the recovered backup
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I concur, try giving it some grungy brushing, that might make it look good, also I would mess with the text def, prob just make it grungy with erasing techniques and such, good job though
post #16
20 September 2005, 22:12 UTC#16
YOU ALL DONT LIKE MY TEXT THEN FUCK YOU!!!!!

Not really. I finished the text at like 6am and said to hell with it. I'm not even sure if I am using that name yet or not. I had a pretty cool smoke-type text but I lost it somehow. Will change and re-post soon.
post #17
21 September 2005, 00:21 UTC#17
uuuggh dont use that stupid pipe looking font I HATE THAT!!! omgosh!

anyway I told you to get more into photoshop along time ago...*sigh* I am always right...first lesson in life.
post #18
21 September 2005, 01:11 UTC#18
dosn't flow bro

but it's better than I could do so good job biggrin.gif
post #19
21 September 2005, 01:12 UTC#19
GOD DAMN MIKE! THAT SUCKED THE BIGGEST MAN PIPE THERE IS! Okay, just kidding, I have no idea how to even open up photoshop on your computer, much less how to manipulate anything but the highly susceptible mind of Kellye. MUAHAHHAHHAHAHHAHAHA. I guess I'm going to have to agree though, the font is kind of boring, it's like the rest is kind of dirty looking, like not quite clear, and then all the sudden in the bottom right, there's a bright green obnoxious font that demands your attention and really negates how cool anything else in the piece is. That's my oppinion though, and I have no idea how to do it.
post #20
21 September 2005, 01:15 UTC#20
the sig he is working on making me is freaking awesome.

ray you break my heart >>> yeah its broke </3 Image file not present in the recovered backup
post #21
21 September 2005, 01:17 UTC#21
QUOTE(bordumbgirl @ Sep 20 2005, 09:15 PM)
ray you break my heart >>> yeah its broke </3 Image file not present in the recovered backup
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What did I do wrong? All I said is that you're a good person with amazing potential to change the world to make it a better place!

or something like that.
post #22
21 September 2005, 01:18 UTC#22
QUOTE(BorDumBRay @ Sep 21 2005, 01:17 AM)
QUOTE(bordumbgirl @ Sep 20 2005, 09:15 PM)
ray you break my heart >>> yeah its broke </3 Image file not present in the recovered backup
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What did I do wrong? All I said is that you're a good person with amazing potential to change the world to make it a better place!

or something like that.
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post #23
21 September 2005, 01:19 UTC#23
I dun understand why people have such a problem with fonts its prolly the easiest thing to me.
post #24
21 September 2005, 01:19 UTC#24
QUOTE(BorDumBRay @ Sep 21 2005, 01:12 AM)
GOD DAMN MIKE!  THAT SUCKED THE BIGGEST MAN PIPE THERE IS!  Okay, just kidding, I have no idea how to even open up photoshop on your computer, much less how to manipulate anything but the highly susceptible mind of Kellye.  MUAHAHHAHHAHAHHAHAHA. I guess I'm going to have to agree though, the font is kind of boring, it's like the rest is kind of dirty looking, like not quite clear, and then all the sudden in the bottom right, there's a bright green obnoxious font that demands your attention and really negates how cool anything else in the piece is.  That's my oppinion though, and I have no idea how to do it.
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post #25
21 September 2005, 01:20 UTC#25
QUOTE(bordumbgirl @ Sep 20 2005, 09:19 PM)
QUOTE(BorDumBRay @ Sep 21 2005, 01:12 AM)
GOD DAMN MIKE!  THAT SUCKED THE BIGGEST MAN PIPE THERE IS!  Okay, just kidding, I have no idea how to even open up photoshop on your computer, much less how to manipulate anything but the highly susceptible mind of Kellye.  MUAHAHHAHHAHAHHAHAHA. I guess I'm going to have to agree though, the font is kind of boring, it's like the rest is kind of dirty looking, like not quite clear, and then all the sudden in the bottom right, there's a bright green obnoxious font that demands your attention and really negates how cool anything else in the piece is.  That's my oppinion though, and I have no idea how to do it.
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post #26
21 September 2005, 01:30 UTC#26
Hahahhahahahaha, okay, maybe that was out of line, but might I say, I meant to bring up the whole bettering the world thing. Just a slip of the tongue, if you will...
post #27
21 September 2005, 02:27 UTC#27
Okay, so it's pretty much agreed that the font could be better. Yeah, and besides the actual style of the font, I believe that the bright green takes away from the entirety of the picture.

Which leads me to the amount of space there is. Too much abstract space. Perhaps add something there, or maybe a bit more color. Or enhance the subtle red criss-cross background. But overall, the picture is pretty neat. Our work is usually bad at late (or early) hours anyways, so that could've affected the outcome, also. Image file not present in the recovered backup
post #28
21 September 2005, 02:43 UTC#28
Needs a border around it, something around 3 or 4 pixels will work, also it's kind of plain, it needs more going on in the background. text is pretty plain but don't over do it with filters. other than than it's a pretty good start.
post #29
21 September 2005, 03:09 UTC#29
I'ts ok for a first try, my first attempt was a gay outer glow and a skating slideshow.