T-shirt Designs

So I talked to an old friend/employee and he has his own screen printing press and does his own shit. He came into my work today and I asked him where he got his Burton shirt at, and he said its not Burton, its 4our. I made it. He is working on designs and he said he wanted me on board to start coming up with stuff, and possibly distributing. This is something I drew up in about 30 minutes tonight.

What ya'll think?

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uhm

Well its... hmmm.

Nah.

Not my style but it looks cool to me.

id wear it

sup slavin

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wouldn't wear it but people would eat that shit up.

We have a massive screen print machine at college, I've never used it, my girlfriend has though, I'll ask her about it and maybe I can use it to make some cool tshirts for myself. lol

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What Joe said. :-)

dude I dont have long hair anymore, but that looks sick, oh and since your on the topic of t shirt stuff

get this shirt in stock again

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yeah I love that shirt looking back on it. I just don't have the fund's to invest

No offense Mike but for some reason I can only picture a 250 pound wigger wearing a shirt like that in XXXXL

I'd wear the first one, minus the splats.

I lost my generate damage t .

it looks cool


definantly not my style though,

Just going for something along those lines. Like said, it was done in less than about 30 minutes. Mainly to show the guy I can use photoshop well enough to produce shit, and have an artistic eye.

Yeah its nice but tere is just a little too much going on.

Oh and mike needs to finance, design, print and send me a new DR T-shirt.

New design. Which one do you think is best? Like's and Dislikes please!

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I want positive critiques here. I'm very serious about starting to design these shirts, if you don't like them don't just say they suck or their shit, give me a reason why you don't like them, and what I could change to make it so you would wear it.

They all look too generic.

More color if your gonna make it simple like that.

dont use generic wank brushes.

yeah, those all look like you did a couple clicks with a few downloaded brushes. not really digging them to be honest.

like the last designs, just get rid of da damn snowboarderizzle. the last one is my favorite.

the 2nd one if you make the back part the front and take out and the front part the back and on that just keep"4our" with the ling and get rid of all the other stuff it would look cool I think

I, personally, think they all look cool. You just gotta market them to the right people. Not everyone would wear them. That's for sure. But if you get them out to the people that like that style, you'll have something there.

yeah. they just offend my eyes, they look like clothes you'd buy for your kid. like they should say 'XTREME SNOWBOARD X' on them or someting.

I'm not the person to ask because I've had the exact same style of clothing since early high school and I never really know what's hip and what not but these designs that cover the whole front just scream hip hop video from early 90s to me. But I guess I'm pretty traditional and keep to my own style.

Yeah, I totally agree. But a lot of kids are into shit like that these days. Goth, Skater and Hip Hop are like... merging. Lol.

It's huge. I work for Pac Sun. The skate/snowboarding clothing industry is blowing up. Maybe its just my area or something, but kids eat this shit up. We already have it on a few of the top skaters in Columbus.