19 June 2006, 22:36 UTC#1
well this is my media project that got me 100/100
the Brief was the opeing sequence to a crime-drame TV/Film.
So hope u all enjoy (sorry for my friends poor acting)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hfsWv8XImeEWatch in a Full Screen Mode
thanks
19 June 2006, 23:04 UTC#2
thought it was pretty good, and you're right, your friend can't act for shit, so hopefully he doesn't wanna be some drama major. couldn't even run with emotion. and said his lines too quickly.
something that bugged me was the shovel hit to the face. was it suppose to look like it hit him? did he dodge it? if it was suppose to hit him you shoulda added a sound effect or something.
besides that I'd say you'd deserve a 90/100
19 June 2006, 23:41 UTC#3
QUOTE(Adem @ Jun 20 2006, 12:04 AM) [snapback]349980[/snapback]
something that bugged me was the shovel hit to the face. was it suppose to look like it hit him? did he dodge it? if it was suppose to hit him you shoulda added a sound effect or something.
That was pretty fucking sweet except what adem pointed out but yeh, I enjoyed it, niiiice titles too.
Well done dude.
19 June 2006, 23:55 UTC#4
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j4FsgtpRa40I got full marks for mine too.
I'll be checking yours out soon pal, sounds great!
20 June 2006, 00:41 UTC#5
QUOTE(Adem @ Jun 20 2006, 01:04 AM) [snapback]349980[/snapback]
thought it was pretty good, and you're right, your friend can't act for shit, so hopefully he doesn't wanna be some drama major. couldn't even run with emotion. and said his lines too quickly.
something that bugged me was the shovel hit to the face. was it suppose to look like it hit him? did he dodge it? if it was suppose to hit him you shoulda added a sound effect or something.
besides that I'd say you'd deserve a 90/100
20 June 2006, 03:45 UTC#6
It was quite good, I thought your intro dragged on way too much though, and I would have filmed random extra stuff that you wouldn't see after it.
Ah well not everyone can act can they? But you passed and that's what's important pal. Well done!
20 June 2006, 14:44 UTC#7
I didnt like it, I didnt know what was going on.
20 June 2006, 15:01 UTC#8
The titles were good and so were some of the angles in the intro, but you must've had a crap teacher who didn't pick up on the overuse of standard effects at the start (inverts etc.)
20 June 2006, 15:02 UTC#9
Kane what media course are you doing? Is it Media Arts or something?
20 June 2006, 18:51 UTC#10
Is that GCSE or summit ?
20 June 2006, 19:35 UTC#11
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Kane what media course are you doing? Is it Media Arts or something?
Digital Art and Technology, formerly known as Media Lab Arts
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20 June 2006, 22:08 UTC#12
thanks everyone for your comments and no Chric is AS level Media

I got a small film (with better actors

) in the works.. so that should be cool and will all be done my way so I dont have to conform to Teachers Rules
20 June 2006, 22:09 UTC#13
Oooh I did a teaser poster for a film and got full marks too in AS level. Piss easy exam wasn't it
20 June 2006, 22:13 UTC#14
haha yeah

but this new project is just like all outside college and so far the script is going well

so I cant wait to start shooting it