I cant say I liked it, at all man

It just seemed to me, like, you just edited it in parts. Like edit the first 10secs, then the next 10secs seperately, and just put them together at the end. Didn't flow very well at all at one point we had two clips fading with eachother then all of a sudden up pops some other random transition effect, im not sure what it was.. but it just didnt flow, I can see what you where trying to do, but I dont think you pulled it off very well.
I think you should maybe re-edit it again, if its going in your DVD.
It didn't flow,
The music felt out of place; it was like you edited the parts, then put the music over the top.. not good,
I've seen a few videos on here where its been really dark, but I've been able to watch them fine, althouh I just couldn't get into yours, the content looked alright.. if I could see it

But from what I saw, and from what I've seen from you before, it looks like you have some nice footage, more is prolly being saved for the DVD??
Well I would suggest re-editing it though, but dont take anything of what I said in an offensive way, just as some tips

Thanks.