DOA MIXUP 1

DOA MIXUP 1
fucking finally our first vid,all the stuff on here is old footage so I know its crap
editing is pretty shit(my first go at editing) and I used WMM
hopefully we will have another vid soon with better footage but still shitty editing.

feedback would be good,thanks

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Not bad, not bad, lots of content.

Like I said on msn, I enjoyed it .. some of the clips made me lol like the fence etc. Also the jumps from the scaffolding into the sand was great.

I really wanna see anouther video from you guys...like you told me some idears you had on msn and they sould good.

For your age group, and your first video, it was fucking awesome.
I hope to see more vids from you in future.

That nutshot looked harsh

thanks KyD for the kind words


yeah the scaffolding jump was done by callum and we are working on another vid


hahaa we are from 13-15 and hopefully our other vid will be as good


hahaaa that was me was fucking sore

It really was totally mixed between good and bad

Firstly, the content was pretty good, as ben said that jump off the scaffoliding was awesome and soem of the trolly stunts were pretty good, but then it's get let down but a really really bad piece of footage.

Secondly, it really dragged on, and was let down by the editing

If you sharpened up your editing and learnt the difference between good abd bad footage, then you'll do well

meh was bout 60% below average footage and 20% good stuff.. I no thats not 100% cos I got bored and couldnt be bothered to watch the rest.

Meh ull get better, we only just really started doing bigger stunts when we turned 14/15.. so u have what a year? lol

yeah I think it was far to long but as I said it was my first try at editing and I didnt expect it to be great

yeah most of the footage was from about 1-2 years ago so it is crap and we are gonna do better bigger stunts.

a lot of content, nice long mix up but the content was WEAK. Lame bush jumps and very unoriginal stuff (kuch CKY, Retardz vs Delayed Reaction).. come up with something new/cool.

As I said not bad for your first video.
I wasnt expecting really good editing, so Im not gonna really focus on that much, as ill know you will get better.

Stunts where ok, some good clips there, but alot of them wernt really that good. But I know this is your old stuff, Im sure when you can be assed capturing your newer footage on it will make a good video.

For now just keep practicing on your editing, make it more enjoyable to watch, dont really worry about the footage as of yet
6/10. Not bad for a first vid, considering you have more content.

sweet shit dude. now u need to go find jackass jr and kick there asses

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It was alright... it could of been better if you took out some of the not so great footage. But very nice for your first vid.

good clip dude

that spear thing look painful

thanks for the advice I will take them into account next time and hopefully make a better video

Sorry dude, but the video was just too hectic for me. There was like a million and one stunts going on in there but they were all edited one after another in a boring way. There were also a lot of really lame stunts in there, and a couple good ones too, but none of them really stood out. You should make your videos more interesting to watch, leave out the lamest stunts, and make a shorter video, as long as it has class. Especially when you're kind of a new group here at homegrownforums. You should want to give your audience the impression that you are better than the average group. I won't review this video no more, cause this the first video I've seen from you guys, and I wanna see if you can improve your stuff for your next video. Oh, one more thing. Try to find yourself a style of your own, a trademark. It can be anything from color schemes to an editing effect as long as people remember your videos for that.
I don't know, take this as a piece of advice, or don't. It's just how I feel.

This vid was too long. I only remember the spear thing

video wont even work for me...then again...I dont think my comp likes dfilms...or any other streaming site either

Thanks to every one who complemented us and gave us advice! im looking forward to editing our new footage and putting it on our site thanks again lawrie

very nice.

fence thing made me lol.

nice man.... there is some good stuff in there.. like it!

The dart thing going in the ass looks sweet

like other ppl sed seemed 2 drag out due 2 the editin, few alrite things in there, camera work was wobbly in places, best bits were prolly some of the high jumps, think wud be better overall if re edited

vid was kind of up and down. I liked the spear and the tack soccer ball, done stuff like it, but not exactly like it. good work keep it up

thanks, and yeah there is no point re-editing it cause its crappy content and I didnt try my best on editing so ill do it on the next vid which will hopefully be done by next week sometime


thanks dan glad you liked it

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Some decent clips. How old are you? It wuold have been better if you would have taken 50% of that stuff out.

we are all aged from 13-15