05 January 2006, 00:31 UTC#1
Hey whazz up ya all
this is our first skit ever
please dont be too hursh on us
any comments and help would be appreciated
please watch this untill the end
Ex.
http://disturbedfilms.com/wmp.php?id=241205 January 2006, 00:58 UTC#2
Okay lets see...
your friend got in the shot (or you), and the angles are kinda ehhh. sound track is good though.
oohhh funny slamming head with the keyboard (really funny, not sarcastic, you didn't hold back)
look at the dog
Oh sad keyboard is dead.
outtakes time..
Most of the outtakes were probably only funny to you and your friends, but the keyboard smashing your head made me giggle. I'm sure you had fun making this skit.
Was this skit inspired by the b.I. monitor skit?
05 January 2006, 01:23 UTC#3
yeah I only liked the head banging bit
05 January 2006, 11:06 UTC#4
QUOTE(Wilbur @ Jan 5 2006, 12:58 AM) [snapback]259942[/snapback]
Okay lets see...
your friend got in the shot (or you), and the angles are kinda ehhh. sound track is good though.
oohhh funny slamming head with the keyboard (really funny, not sarcastic, you didn't hold back)
look at the dog
Oh sad keyboard is dead.
outtakes time..
Most of the outtakes were probably only funny to you and your friends, but the keyboard smashing your head made me giggle. I'm sure you had fun making this skit.
Was this skit inspired by the b.I. monitor skit?
thanks I guess
I said it was our first skit
no I never seen the b.I skit...can I still download it?
QUOTE(Lozerkid0182 @ Jan 5 2006, 01:23 AM) [snapback]259958[/snapback]
yeah I only liked the head banging bit
05 January 2006, 14:50 UTC#5
wtf is up with that room?! it's like as big as a closet!!!
where the f is your bed?!!!?!?
05 January 2006, 14:54 UTC#6
I didnt really like it. It got pretty redundant with the whole hitting your head with the keyboard thing. There was a cool shot where the keys were hitting the ground though. Groovy music.
05 January 2006, 15:22 UTC#7
I liked it. I laughed.
05 January 2006, 17:51 UTC#8
no good
05 January 2006, 19:51 UTC#9
QUOTE(Boner Jones @ Jan 5 2006, 02:50 PM) [snapback]260215[/snapback]
wtf is up with that room?! it's like as big as a closet!!!
where the f is your bed?!!!?!?
haha
the coach is my bed
yeah my parents dont like me very much so I got the smallest room
QUOTE(Mi5anthr0pe @ Jan 5 2006, 02:54 PM) [snapback]260217[/snapback]
I didnt really like it. It got pretty redundant with the whole hitting your head with the keyboard thing. There was a cool shot where the keys were hitting the ground though. Groovy music.
thanks
QUOTE(T0M @ Jan 5 2006, 03:22 PM) [snapback]260221[/snapback]
I liked it. I laughed.
thanks
QUOTE(WEAK @ Jan 5 2006, 05:51 PM) [snapback]260285[/snapback]
no good
05 January 2006, 20:15 UTC#10
QUOTE(Extazy @ Jan 5 2006, 11:06 AM) [snapback]260149[/snapback]
no I never seen the b.I skit...can I still download it?
Yup.
http://www.boredom-induced.com/vids/monitor-final.wmv05 January 2006, 20:18 UTC#11
QUOTE(Wilbur @ Jan 5 2006, 08:15 PM) [snapback]260317[/snapback]
QUOTE(Extazy @ Jan 5 2006, 11:06 AM) [snapback]260149[/snapback]
no I never seen the b.I skit...can I still download it?
Yup.
http://www.boredom-induced.com/vids/monitor-final.wmvthanks
what did you mean by look at the dog?
Edit: haha nice skit
I see why you thought that
05 January 2006, 20:30 UTC#12
I briefly saw a dog in the bottom right of the screen in your video.
Was there a dog in the room when you filmed it?
05 January 2006, 20:33 UTC#13
QUOTE(Wilbur @ Jan 5 2006, 08:30 PM) [snapback]260327[/snapback]
I briefly saw a dog in the bottom right of the screen in your video.
Was there a dog in the room when you filmed it?
no
no dog
just 3 guys
you cant imagine how hard it was to film in my room
my room is like 3 meters on 4 meters
like boner said a fucking closet
can someone tell me how can we improve our next skits cause that was our first one
05 January 2006, 20:34 UTC#14
My old room was like 10ft x 10ft. I liked it though
06 January 2006, 14:53 UTC#15
I didnt really like this... The main reason is the plot... it was a pretty shit plot... there shouldve been more going on... this was pretty flat... The only thing that made this skit bareable was the smashing of the keyboard...
You need more light... try to work more on the cuts(to make it smoother) and work on the angles... and the camerawork was a lil shakey...
I allso got the feeling that you didnt really know yourselves what the genre of the skit was gonna be... I guess it resembled comedy... but there was really nothing much funny in the skit...
So I'd say you guys need to work on making a good plot.
I'm sorry if youre offended by this critque.
-j0nes-
