born brokens first skit

clicky

this is our first skit, you probably wont really understand if you dont no much about chavs, um yeah feedback please

wow, that was hard as shit to follow. It'd probably be easier if I were a brit, but when you mix the accents with the poor camcorder audio, it makes it hard to under stand for us americans. haha.

but yeah, I'd say, mainly, try and cut your shit down some. (length wise), and work on getting better shots with the cam. It was hella shaky, and alot of the cuts were like "what?!". ahah.

sorry I didnt like it
you kinda lost the plot at the end

Too long.

Damn, I thought this was a great idea, but I feel you didnt pull it off aswell as you could of.

Erm was alright, love the idea. But the chavs seemed more like gangsta's, the bit where they looked at each others eyes and started fighting is spot on.

But it didnt feel right, I like the idea of the narrative, but sometimes you couldnt hear it properly, and the camera was shaky.
Also cutting it down a bit would of helped alot, I didnt manage to watch it all.

But you had it going good, but it went downhill. Maybe you should re-edit it?
Some fades where out of place, well seemed like that to me.

Im tryna be as strict as possible here

But I love the idea, but you could of, and can pull this off better. 4/10.
You can make it better!

ok maybe I will I just dont no what bits to cut down thanks for watching it anyway you 4

I exited it after 18 seconds. Poorly made.

ha ha ha oh well thanks for watching it in the first place