Would You?

Hello, Im Karl

I have just started working on "real" site design,

so I had tried several designs, the first two, werent very good,
then I did this. Today.

If you needed some sort of design work, and
you stumbled onto this page, would you want
to get design work from it.

http://wvpp.natoka.net

It is not completely done, but the layout part is.

The centered version is Here

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Newer Version Here

^ Nobody?

smart looking site but ... the buttons look a little large fix them and yeah ... I would

which buttons?

home products services about etc ?

yes make them smaller and its a nice design

ok, thanks for your suggestions, I ll work on that now...

the design looks alright but the structure looks really crap to be honest.. plus you just used a few big images to make your design with. It would be better to cut them all in parts (buttons should be seperated images for example). so.. no.. I wouldnt (probably because I can make my own )

QUOTE the design looks alright but the structure looks really crap to be honest

so just more slicing?

yes ... and make everthing abit smaller and detailed makes evrything look kooler

I'd change the font too. Looks too "default".

ok,

so far, small, more slices, and detailed,

do you mean the content font, or image font
the content isnt final or anything
im just working on layout touches I guess

lol, default

Content font.

yeah, lol, I first thought you were talking about the image fonts,
then I looked at the image fonts, and im like, hmm,

... ...

To be honest.. probs not... there are tons of companys with desiigns like that, you need something on it that makes it different and stands out, and on that site, there isnt really..

^ sure will be kind enough to make a flash site for cash

about my deal man .... imma hold of for I while got to go buy my new pedal .... maybe a few weeks ok

Pk man, yeah talk about it on msn

yeah ill make you flash banner for some cash

im capable of making flash crap, although I probably will just
put the flash things on one of the sides, probably the left

I ll replace the news to something a flash box thing, then it pulls the news from external file, for the first part of it, then goes to different things

dont mean to sound harsh but I dont like the look of it at all, I thought the banner was amatuer looking and it just seems like the whole design has been rushed, I dont like the look of the buttons either...

u dont have to pay attention to my comments but thats just my opinion.

Just out of interest.. have you got any others that you have made that you could show us

yeah, I made two other ones before I came up with this one for the site, but they are crappy,

http://www.wvpp.natoka.net/productions/templates


or.. for instant links,

#1

#2

http://www.natoka.net/wvpp/productions/tem...index.html.html

change that font and that would be better ,,, sumin a bit more stylish

I like everything but the banner.

which part of the banner

I thought... #2 is the best one out of all of em.. I think that design would work well

The top. I dont like the 'outside' feeling much.

I might change the image behind the banner, hmm

yeah do the banner .... make it really kick ass .... or pay adem to do it

Okay, everything else looks good.

thanks for you suggestion im currently making a flash thing for the left side, with some sound at begining, then show some things, like,

flash solutions

graphics that fit your needs

etc. etc.


and when its done itll have links and on mouseover they will make like a little sound