I felt the intro dragged on way to long, and it should of been around 20-30 of slow mo key points in the footage. you had to much aftermath from stake tricks and you only needed to see footage of the tricks not the run up and rollin away ect, then when it did pick up it ended far to quickly, if you have a dvd you must have alot of footage you could of used to hype the dvd its self. but I know your not hardcore and your not totaly shit so I was waiting for you to say what your like and it was funny
External image not preserved — inspect source: http://homegrownforums.com/html/emoticons/Copy of dirol.gif but yeah, if you have time, do how I said to edit it and im sure alot more people will like your promo and want your dvd
ill just run it down if you want to redo it,
30sec MAX of slo-mo tricks,stunts,randomh things...not need to drag the clips on. just do this and you should get around 10 clips in. do this in black n white and when the music hits, change to colour (like you did) but have a clip of a stunt or skate bail going in slo-mo and have it mid stunt then normal pase for the stunt or crash. then play alot more clips faster, mid stunts and footage at there key points or buildin upto the key points then cut to the next clip.
hope that helps, and if anyone here whos good at editing reads my idea im sure they will see it worth doing...I hope. if not then say.
key points...basicly the point where the stunt looks best (at the point for good screen shots)
peace
-webby
p.s. whens your dvd for sale?